redbyrd_sgfic ([info]redbyrd_sgfic) wrote,
@ 2009-09-08 16:37:00
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Hold Until Relieved, Gen, PG, SG-1
[info]princessofg posted some thoughts on Jack O'Neill that got me thinking. Post-series, both the post and the story have spoilers for SGU.


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Jack O'Neill went to visit George the day he found out. It was convenient to have him there in Arlington.

"You'll never guess what they're doing now," he told his old commanding officer. He didn't wait for an answer. "They're promoting me. Again." They hadn't pinned the third star on his shoulder yet, but he could already feel the weight of it. Head of Homeworld Security had been bad enough- his new job would involve conducting the exploration of two galaxies, diplomatic relations with alien races, coordinating the long-awaited public disclosure of the Stargate, and last and worst; regularly liasing with the IOA. His staff had jokingly dubbed it Starfleet Command.

"It helps that the biggest threats are gone," Jack said. The war with the Ori was down to the mopping up. There hadn't been a serious Goa'uld bid for power since Ba'al. The Replicators weren't a threat in either galaxy. "But it's still quite a can of worms you left me holding, my friend. And what the hell am I still doing here, a thousand miles away from my favorite fishing hole?"

Not that he really needed an answer. The number of officers who had served out there among the stars was growing every day, but there were few with the necessary experience who would soon reach the rarified rank that Jack now occupied. He couldn't possibly let this office go to an officer without that offworld experience, even if the president was willing to let him. Jack looked across the field at the soft glimmer of white stones in the summer evening, each one marking a man or woman who'd served-- and the stars unseen overhead where men and women walked under his command. It was they who made it impossible to turn this down.

Jack took a deep breath. "I know. It wasn't what I wanted or expected or would have asked for. But--" Jack looked down at the marker, remembering the man who'd had his back, whether he stood looking down at the gate or in front of a congressional committee. "We don't leave our people behind." It wasn't a job you could walk away from. Not when your people were sometimes in more danger from decisions made inside the Beltway than they were from alien menaces. George certainly hadn't, or at least not until his health had left him no other choice.

He stared at the bland stone, inscription clear despite the gathering dusk. Lieutenant General George Hammond, devoted husband and father, opta ardua pennis astra sequi. Thanks to three months in a time loop, he could still translate that. "They choose hardship that follow the stars on wings," Jack smiled wryly. "Very appropos, sir."

One star, two, three-- that didn't matter. The fishing would be there for his rare visits. On bad days, he swore it was worse than Iraq, Antarctica and Ba'al's prison combined. But Jack had his people's backs.



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[info]sg_fignewton
2009-09-08 08:49 pm UTC (link)
Oh, Jack. And George.

Must. rec. immediately. :)

ETA: Told ya. ;)

Edited at 2009-09-08 08:55 pm UTC

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2009-09-08 09:05 pm UTC (link)
*blinkblink* Okay, that was spookily fast.

Thank you!

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(no subject) - [info]sg_fignewton, 2009-09-08 09:44 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]princessofg
2009-09-08 09:04 pm UTC (link)
omg wow THANK YOU for writing this!!!.

meta is wonderful, but fic is always better, if you ask me!!! i am so delighted that the meta prompted this and i'll note it in the header.

it's beautiful. the quote is perfect -- brought a shiver to my spine. or is it a quote? i'm assuming it is but i don't know the source.

yay.

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2009-09-08 09:10 pm UTC (link)
It's a quote from Virgil. The internet is my friend. :)

I suspect that Jack has mercifully blotted out Daniel's rant on the accuracy of the translation (I'm just going to assume that Daniel had an opinion on it at the time, he generally does). Also, in my fanon, Jack remembers a great deal of Ancient from the time loop but pretends not to. *g*

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(no subject) - [info]princessofg, 2009-09-08 09:11 pm UTC (Expand)

[info]rdamel
2009-09-08 09:20 pm UTC (link)
Very good--serving in Washington is probably killing him, but he'll do it for "the team" in the largest sense, I think. His duty trumps his personal wishes.

Melisssa M.

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[info]supplyship
2009-09-08 09:20 pm UTC (link)
Fabulous little ficlet. Jack O'Neill never turns away from duty.

It was convenient to have him there in Arlington. Wah! :(

And Jack *totally* hung on to some Latin! I think there's a bunch more in there after his second Ancient download too.

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[info]tejas
2009-09-08 09:32 pm UTC (link)
Yes! Exactly!

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[info]anna_sg1
2009-09-08 09:35 pm UTC (link)
Oh... just awsome.

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[info]chocolatekettle
2009-09-08 09:51 pm UTC (link)
Fabulous :)

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[info]suzannemarie
2009-09-08 10:05 pm UTC (link)
Very nice. Quintessential Jack.

(Is it Homeland Security or Homeworld Security?

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2009-09-09 11:28 am UTC (link)
Ah, good catch! Fixed. Thank you.

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[info]blue_meridian
2009-09-08 10:35 pm UTC (link)
Oh-!! That is fantastic!

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[info]hanarobi
2009-09-08 11:08 pm UTC (link)
I'm here because Princessofg said that this had to be read. She was right. Beautifully done. And it is truly the only explanation for Jack's acceptance of a job he hated--he did it for the people he loved.

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2009-09-09 11:32 am UTC (link)
Certainly not original to me-- I'm sure I was somewhat influenced by Sg_Fignewton's comments in the same thread. All the same- Jack certainly didn't do it for love of the work. And by the third star, he's got to have kind of come to terms with it. Still. He's Jack, so there will be grumbling.

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[info]aelfgyfu_mead
2009-09-08 11:55 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I miss George! Clearly Jack feels the same. Very bittersweet.

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[info]lokei
2009-09-08 11:57 pm UTC (link)
Oh Jack, and oh General Hammond. So perfect, the pair of them, even if one of them is only a tacit presence. I love the Latin phrase.

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[info]aurora_novarum
2009-09-08 11:58 pm UTC (link)
Aw. Love Jack communing with George. Very nice quiet moment. :-)

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[info]kuwdora
2009-09-09 12:08 am UTC (link)
here via [info]princessofg. oh. damn that's excellent.

hanks to three months in a time loop, he could still translate that.

niiiiiice

*bookmarks*

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[info]synecdochic
2009-09-09 12:13 am UTC (link)
OH GOD JAAAAAAAACK. And HAMMOND. and of COURSE that's where Jack goes when he needs advice. And. And. AND AND AND. *flail*

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2009-09-09 11:43 am UTC (link)
I do have the feeling this wasn't his first visit. Also that he wanted to commiserate with someone who understood, and his choices are not vast there...

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[info]ladyholder
2009-09-09 01:11 am UTC (link)
Loved this. So very, very Jack to put everyone else ahead of himself. Because they are all his kids. Even the guy who is 60+ years older than he is.

Thank you for writing this.

~L

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2009-09-09 11:41 am UTC (link)
Yeah, also after he becomes The Man, they're *all* his kids.

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[info]normaltrouble
2009-09-09 01:39 am UTC (link)
The only person I see other than Don Davis as George Hammond is the actor who played him in 1969. That's it.

That's very touching story. I think I'll rec this in my DW journal.

Thank you.

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[info]paininthemikta
2009-09-09 02:03 am UTC (link)
Awww... Miss George, a lot!

How touching, insightful and... how Jack!
Bravo!

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[info]l_jade
2009-09-09 04:03 am UTC (link)
Ouch! & awww... .. thank you for this :)

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[info]renwah
2009-09-09 04:13 am UTC (link)
Nice. I would tell you which were my fav parts, but I would just repeat the whole fic back to you. So Jack!

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[info]princessofg
2009-09-12 10:27 pm UTC (link)
OMG I LOVE YOUR ICON!!!

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[info]kaiz
2009-09-09 04:20 am UTC (link)
Here via [info]princessofg.

This story is utter brilliance. Wow, just. Wow.

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[info]ninja007
2009-09-09 04:47 am UTC (link)
Oh, poor Jack and George... They work hard until they can't do it any longer.

Great fic! Loved it. Well written and so very Jack.

Miss that man.

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[info]luthien
2009-09-09 06:01 am UTC (link)
Pointed here by [info]kaiz.

What a great, great little character piece. It fills in a small space in the canon that needed filling, and it does it perfectly.

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[info]annieb1955
2009-09-09 06:15 am UTC (link)
Just awesome

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[info]kuonji14
2009-09-09 06:23 am UTC (link)
I LOVE the second sentence: It was convenient to have him there in Arlington.

It just encapsulates the whole feeling of irreverence, sadness, good times past, with a dash of wth. Maybe that last is just me being confused, thinking, "Wait, I thought he was dead-- ohhh!"

This is excellent.

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2009-09-09 11:38 am UTC (link)
I'm afraid I did that quite deliberately. If you consciously try to place the story in canon, you'd realize it has to be after George is dead, but who does that for just a little quick thing?

Also, I once visited Arlington at that time of day, and it made a huge impression.

*g* Thank you.

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