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Picking Up the Pieces, PG, Gen, SG-1
An episode tag for S2 Show and Tell
(for [info]pepper_field, whose recap questions on [info]redial_the_gate inspired it)



The wormhole thinned into wisps of mist and disappeared.

O'Neill sagged a bit at the departure of the boy, and Captain Carter looked wistfully after her father.

Teal'c exchanged a glance with Daniel Jackson. "Dr. Fraiser requested that you return to the infirmary after seeing the boy leave, O'Neill," he reminded his friend.

O'Neill didn't appear to hear him. "I hope..." he murmured, so softly Teal'c could barely hear him.

"Like you said, Jack, it's his only chance," Daniel offered.

O'Neill shuddered. "They're going to put a snake in his head."

Samantha Carter looked a bit defensive. "I'm sure they'll take good care of him, sir."

O'Neill's expression smoothed out, more because he didn't want to cause his second any distress over her father's condition than because he was convinced, Teal'c thought.

"Fraiser will be waiting," O'Neill said.

The others trailed him to the elevator. O'Neill glanced at them. "You don't have to come with me," he told them.

"I wanted to see how SG-5 was doing," Daniel said blandly. "They came in hot while you were busy getting bandaged up."

"And I was going to check on Airman Long," Captain Carter added without missing a beat.

"Airman Long?" O'Neill frowned.

"The technician who was helping me install the palm scanner," she explained. "He was injured when the Reetou blew the Tok'ra through the window in the gate room."

"We've got to get something better than safety glass in that window," O'Neill said, twitching the shoulder that had once been pierced by an arrow. He looked at Teal'c.

"I plan to ensure that you arrive at the infirmary safely, as Dr. Fraiser requested," Teal'c said.

"Suck-up." O'Neill said.

Teal'c simply inclined his head. "As General Hammond instructed, we have completed two more sweeps of the SGC, O'Neill, and are satisfied that there are no more Reetou present. Thus I am free to ensure that you are well."

"Your team did not encounter any Reetou the first time," O'Neill said, somewhat aggrievedly.

Teal'c had no response. He felt a somewhat guilty relief not to have experienced the disturbing effects of the Reetou presence again and he regretted not having found the aliens in time to help stop them, but only chance had directed his team to a safe area. O'Neill knew this as well as he did.

"Not if by encounter, you mean, 'were shot by'," Daniel said in a helpful tone.

O'Neill turned a baleful glare on his friend. "And you, Daniel, need a refresher on military hand signals."

"If there's a military hand signal for, 'there are non-combatants in that room, so maybe we shouldn't dash in with guns blazing' I'd be happy to learn it!" Daniel retorted.

"Military hand signals are intended to convey basic information, not allow you to argue about your instructions," O'Neill said in a tone of considerable exasperation.

Teal'c relaxed. He knew that O'Neill recognized their transparent attempt to distract him, but clearly he wasn't going to try to dissuade them. Once set off, O'Neill and Daniel Jackson could argue for hours. Which was not something Teal'c usually encouraged, but for every rule, it appeared there indeed was an exception.

They arrived at the infirmary to find the two airmen with TERs playing them over the infirmary.

"What's going on?" O'Neill demanded.

Dr. Fraiser turned to look at him. "Two of those Reetou creatures were blown to bits in my infirmary, Colonel. I requested these airmen clean them up."

"But the Reetou are in a different phase," Carter said. "You can't see or feel them."

"Or smell them," Daniel Jackson added under his breath. Then winced- apparently O'Neill had kicked him.

One of the airmen looked up at Dr. Fraiser with a pleading expression. "I'm not sure there's anything we can do, doctor," he told her. "Nothing we do seems to affect the bits." He stood aside, and his cohort obligingly played the beam of the TER over the bug guts smashed on the floor.

"Ew," O'Neill said, looking away. Captain Carter turned a bit green.

Daniel Jackson moved in closer. "May I have that?" he asked, reaching for the TER.

The airman willingly relinquished it.

Daniel illuminated the remains with the TER, apparently examining the straps and equipment. He reached out to touch one bug-innard-splattered pouch and his hand went through it without resistance. "I wonder if these are some of the cross-phase explosives that Selmak mentioned," he speculated.

At that Captain Carter looked intrigued and squatted down beside him, apparently forgetting her queasiness. "I don't know how we could tell," she said, "given that we can't touch them."

"Why don't they fall through the floor?" Daniel asked her.

"Clearly they interact with solid matter to some extent," Carter said, "Or how could the Reetou even move around? They'd just drift."

"They didn't seem able to go through-," Daniel said, his words coming faster

"-the blast doors-" Carter said nodding.

"-or the iris-"

"But they go through us, so-"

"Is it because we're organic-?"

"-maybe a function of the density-"

The two stopped bothering to finish sentences as they swapped theories faster than the others could follow the conversation.

"That's all very well and good," Dr. Fraiser interrupted. "But am I getting dead Reetou out of my infirmary or not?"

Carter and Daniel stopped and looked toward her.

"There's really no chance of infection or anything like that," Captain Carter said, standing up.

Fraiser gave her a look that clearly communicated volumes.

"But I think maybe if we tried pushing them with something solid enough-" she looked around.

Teal'c picked up a metal chair, and offered it to her.

She and Daniel each took a side and scraped the edge along the floor. It made a metallic noise as it passed through the dead Reetou.

"It moved!" Daniel said. "Just a bit."

"We need something denser," Captain Carter said.

Teal'c was the only one who saw O'Neill sway a bit on his feet. "Colonel O'Neill," he said, reaching out to steady his team leader. "You do not appear well."

"I'm fine-" O'Neill protested, but it was enough to divert Janet Fraiser's attention back to him.

"We'll use the other examination room," she said. "Colonel, this way," she summoned a nurse with a glance as she turned toward a Reetou-less room.

Teal'c observed that the two airmen, who had briefly looked hopeful that they were not going to be called on to do anything more, were receiving instructions from Captain Carter to construct some kind of dense and no doubt heavy device to scrape up Reetou remains.

Daniel Jackson was peering once more at the dead Reetou, attempting to open its equipment pouch with a metal rod.

Teal'c finally allowed himself to become conscious of a distressed fluttering in his abdomen. His symbiote was still agitated from the presence of the Reetou. He should go kel'no'reem, try to calm the creature. He turned to the door of the infirmary. His work here was done.




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[info]abyssinia4077
2008-05-24 03:41 pm UTC (link)
Hee :) Daniel and Sam and a puzzle. *squishes them*

I love Daniel's hoped-for hand signal.

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2008-05-25 03:07 am UTC (link)
I think Daniel keeps trying to invent more hand signals, but Jack doesn't want the team to use nonstandard signals the other teams won't know.

Got ideas for any more of Daniel's signals? I like:
"There are some interesting ruins that way."
"I thought I heard something."
"Let me talk to these people, they may be friendly."

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[info]aelfgyfu_mead
2008-05-24 06:40 pm UTC (link)
Oh, very nice! You manage to deal with some of the emotional aftermath, the "why don't they fall through the floor?" problem, and the hand signals all at once!

It did bother me that Daniel didn't seem to get the hand signals. It's a language; he should have learned it by then. Jack's response is perfect, though:
"Military hand signals are intended to convey basic information, not allow you to argue about your instructions," O'Neill said in a tone of considerable exasperation.

And the Science Twins go at it again!

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2008-05-24 08:24 pm UTC (link)
It has *never* made any sense either that Daniel would be unable or unwilling to learn military hand signals. In fact, what he does in the episode is try to convey information that the hand signals don't allow for. Clearly the problem isn't that he doesn't *understand*- he just finds them really limiting!

So that and Pepper's dead Reetou bit speculation in comments of the redial recap got me started.... (And as I said to Pepper, I think that Daniel keeps trying to interject his own improvised hand signals, which absolutely *appalls* Jack, even though *Jack* had always known exactly what he meant. Jack's afraid he'll try to do it in the context of a larger battle, I think.)

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[info]pepper_field
2008-05-24 10:35 pm UTC (link)
Oh, yay! Heehee, excellent - you've tied up most of my questions right there. Yeah, that definitely explains Daniel's hand-signals - it's not that he doesn't understand, it's just that the vocabulary is too limited. *g*

I love Sam and Daniel's lightning-quick exchange of ideas, and Janet's extreme lack of amusement at having dead Reetou in her infirmary, no matter how invisible, untouchable and unsmellable. Fab!

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2008-05-25 01:30 am UTC (link)
*g* Haz keybord, wil fix kanon for FB.

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2008-05-25 01:37 am UTC (link)
And of course, since the introduction of the Sodan cloaking device, we really need fic where the use the cross-phase explosives for something (the power of a small nuke, they said). Hmm. Probably some kind of Ori fic.

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[info]pepper_field
2008-05-25 01:55 am UTC (link)
Ooooh, I like the way you think!

I was worrying about Daniel poking the explosives with a stick, actually. And, given that they work in our phase, they really, REALLY would need to be cleared up.

I love this following-the-logic-through thing. *g*

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2008-05-25 02:01 am UTC (link)
Hmm. Yeah, poking them with a stick probably isn't a great idea. Hadn't thought of that! No doubt in some universes, the SGC was wiped out by a mysterious explosion.

This is going to drive Area 51 crazy. Assuming of course that Hammond doesn't tell them to leave the retrieval of the explosives out of their report and just stash them in a storeroom.

*files under loose ends that really need to be tied up in fic one of these years*

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[info]6beforelunch
2008-05-24 11:03 pm UTC (link)
Nice work! I like how you tackled all the dangling plots points in that episode and tied them up. Especially the parts with Sam and Daniel theorizing about how the being out of phase thing really works. Since they never bothered to explain it in Crystal Skull or Arthur's Mantle either.

And I love the bit about the hand signals. Like others have said, it makes no sense at all that Daniel wouldn't easily pick up military signals. They just don't let him be as, ah, verbose as he generally likes to be. ;)

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2008-05-25 01:34 am UTC (link)
Thanks! Yes, Crystal Skull in particular has always bugged me. I've always pictured Daniel in Crystal Skull finding that he could push his way through doors, if he tried, but they were dense enough that it made him feel seriously weird. (Having people run right through him was bad enough.) So he stopped doing it.

And really, I bet Sam and Daniel talked and theorized about this until Jack and Teal'c were ready to shoot them- or would have, had they not been talking and theorizing about time travel after their experience in 1969, coming right up.

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[info]holdouttrout
2008-05-25 02:01 am UTC (link)
Wonderful post-ep. Fits the tone perfectly. Poor Janet, with bits of dead Reetu all around her lab.

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2008-05-25 03:22 am UTC (link)
Thanks! I fear that Janet was seriously squicked by the idea of invisible bug parts littering the lab. (And she hasn't even met the little creepy-crawlies of Legacy yet.)

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[info]aurora_novarum
2008-05-25 03:23 am UTC (link)
Oh how great! Loved the explanation of all these extraneous canon Reetou bits.

Poor Janet. She probably still suspected bits cluttering up her infirmary even after Sam's machine. Loved all the individualized banter, and the unspoken banter, especially Janet's "look" to Sam and Jack kicking Daniel after the snarky comment.

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2008-05-25 03:46 am UTC (link)
I quite liked the thread in the episode recap comments where people were speculating on whether Nirrti or Daniel could have seen them in episodes where they were out of phase, and if they smelled if they did... Had to explain things somehow!

And really, this episode needed more teamy goodness. Can't have too much teamy goodness!

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[info]sg_fignewton
2008-05-25 01:31 pm UTC (link)
Oh, this was totally adorable! Science twins in full-on babble mode, and Teal'c practically rolling his eyes at the silly Tau'ri, and Janet all queasy from Reetou bits, and Jack and Daniel arguing about hand signals! Wheee!

Loved it. :)

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2008-05-25 02:19 pm UTC (link)
I figured it for a known crowd-pleaser *g*. Glad you enjoyed.

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[info]sg_betty
2008-06-03 05:40 am UTC (link)
You have a wonderful way with the characters! One wonders if there are still bits of Reetu wedged into out of the way corners of the lab to this day.

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2008-06-03 01:28 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! I feel sure that there are Reetu bits here and there. Also that once the Reetou-scraper was constructed, there was yet another sweep of the facility looking for cross-phase stuff that they might have left lying around...

Perhaps Sam and Mitchell find some of them when they're out of phase in S9. *g*
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"Ew!" Mitchell didn't know what it was, but it was in this phase, and it was stuck to his shoe.

"What's wrong?" Sam asked, turning back to look.

"It's - goo." Mitchell said. He glanced around the exam room. "There's extradimensional goo in the infirmary."

Sam squatted down to look at the dried out crusty bits and residual slime that he'd stepped in. "Oh," she said. "Surprising it hasn't dried out after all these years."

"What is it?" Mitchell wondered how he was going to scrape the boot, since he couldn't actually touch anything that he could use to do the scraping. Even the floor was a little spongy underfoot, as if he might sink through if he fell down hard enough.

Sam grinned at him mischievously. "You're the scholar of SGC history, Cam, you tell me."

"Interdimensional goo is not ringing a bell, Sam," he said plaintively. "What *is* this crap?"

She stood up. "Reetou guts."

Mitchell took a moment to recall the details of the report. "You killed them with TERs, right?"

"Yes, right here." Sam smiled. "A couple of longsuffering airmen had the job of scraping up the remains, crating them in a six-inch-thick lead box and sending them to Area 51. Looks like they missed a spot." Her smile faded. "Good thing Janet never knew."

Mitchell looked mournfully at his boot. "But how do I get it off?"

Sam shrugged. "Hard to say. I wonder if it will stay here, or come back with us when we transfer back to our own phase?"

Mitchell was mildly gratified that even Sam, who could be a serious pessimist, was talking in terms of 'when' and not 'if'. But still. "I hope it stays here, personally."

Sam shook her head. "Scientifically, it would be a lot more interesting if you can bring a sample back. It never occurred to us to look for traces of the Reetou when we got the Sodan phase shifters."

"Great. They never told me I'd have to be covered in alien bug guts for science," Mitchell joked.

"Just another fun-filled day at Stargate Command," Sam said cheerfully. "Shall we head up to the control room?"

Mitchell abandoned his attempts to clean his boots as he recalled that they were supposed to be looking for Daniel Jackson. "Sure, why not?" As they left the room, he resisted the urge to look back and see if he was leaving a trail of squishy Reetou bits behind him.
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[info]cnidarian
2008-06-04 05:28 pm UTC (link)
Wonderful! Both of them. Hee!

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[info]maychorian
2008-07-08 09:42 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I love the team interactions in this--Jack and Daniel, Daniel and Sam, Janet and all of them. LOVE! And Teal'c, of course.

Lovely!

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[info]loriel_eris
2008-07-12 02:15 pm UTC (link)
I read this when you posted, but obviously completely failed to comment. *headdesk*

I love the way that SG1 are all "But it won't cause infection/you can't see/touch/smell it" and Janet just looks at them and they radically re-organise their priorities to "Yes, of course we'll do something about it". *g*

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2008-07-14 12:08 pm UTC (link)
Really, you don't want to mess with Janet. Even Teal'c doesn't mess with Janet...

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[info]flingslass
2008-07-12 02:16 pm UTC (link)
Teal'c is a shifty bugger :D

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2008-07-14 12:07 pm UTC (link)
He certainly is! Notice how he doesn't get involved in cleaning up Reetou *at all*!

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[info]kateydidnt
2008-07-14 09:35 am UTC (link)
I think I've read almost all of your fics on your site (I adore Rearranging Fate and the Endeavor series--I re-read them regularly). I absolutely love your writing style and your characterizations are so perfect!

I even love the stories you've written about episodes I haven't seen yet--of course after reading your fics I then have to go hunt down the episode in question and then re-read your story after the viewing.

Your writing is brilliant!

Question: Have you ever written the fourth part of Setting up house?

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2008-07-14 12:06 pm UTC (link)
Hi Katey- thanks for the kind words.

The fourth (and fifth) parts of Setting Up House have been enmeshed in intractable plot problems for what seems like forever- even longer than the blasted Teal'c fic I just (finally!) posted. I do plan to finish that series, it's just taken way, way longer than I ever expected. (Basically, RL has been kicking my ass for the last couple of years- it's not good for the writing output.)

No promises on when it'll finally go up, but I have lots and lots of things left to write in this fandom, so I'm not going anywhere...

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[info]cesy
2009-07-13 02:22 pm UTC (link)
This is brilliant. I love how you've filled in the plot holes and Daniel's attitude to hand-signals.

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[info]a_phoenixdragon
2009-11-08 09:43 am UTC (link)
Wonderful...a beautiful tag, honey!!

*Hugs you happily!*

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[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2009-11-09 07:27 pm UTC (link)
Glad you enjoyed it, sweetie! *hugs back*

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