redbyrd_sgfic ([info]redbyrd_sgfic) wrote,
@ 2005-09-26 14:08:00
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New fic: Eve of Destruction
On a personal note- this is the first of several stories I'm trying to finish up and post before I get too sucked into my new job. The new job means I'm going to be having a lot less time to write. However, it does forestall the eventual consequences of prolonged unemployment. Which would interfere with writing a lot more than just having a normal work schedule, really it would…

So, here I am returning yet again to the S1 end/S2 beginning arc, which has inspired so much fic of all sorts. The fic is Eve of Destruction – a series of missing scenes from Ferretti's POV for TBFTGOG, Politics, Within the Serpent's Grasp, and Serpent's Lair.

I've always liked Ferretti and felt he was one of the more neglected minor characters. We see him for the last time in the series at the end of S1, and there's no explanation given for why he's no longer commanding SG-2 the next time we see them. I like the idea of him staying around, and in my version of the Stargate universe, he's still at the SGC in S8, so he had to be doing something all this time. I'm positing that he had a serious injury that took him out of the picture for awhile, and he wound up serving on a different team as a result.

Other reasons to write this- I've always been curious about the people who were evacuated to the Alpha Site.. we never hear any more about them. I also had to wonder about the SGC personnel who were evacuated.. how must they have felt- leaving their families in the face of an alien invasion. And I wanted to get a snapshot of how the different SGC people cope with the secrecy. A lot of the families have to know that 'Deep Space Radar Telemetry' is a load of hooey.. particularly when their family members come home injured. It was also fun to write a character whose home life is not tragic and screwed up.. but trying to have a normal life while working at the SGC has to present its own challenges.

And lastly- it was a small thing, but I wanted to know why we didn't see Ferretti and Fraiser at the welcome-back celebration at the end of Serpent's Lair.



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[info]a_phoenixdragon
2005-09-26 09:46 pm UTC (link)
Looking forward to it! I love your insights into the characters! You always seem to just KNOW what is going on in their heads *sigh*... If only I could get you to climb that slashy fence... But that's okay - your Gen fics are to DIE for sweetie - just let me know when you post, and where to get it, and I'll be there every time!

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All your fics
[info]lyore
2005-09-27 12:20 pm UTC (link)
Um... Hi.

You don't know me, but I've been reading your stuff for a while, and I figured it was about time I sent a bit of feedback your way.

General comments - I love all your stories - short or long, I adore the writing, the POVs, the plots. Love it all. More Please!

Eve of Destruction - Ferretti is one of my favourite minor characters on the show. It's nice to get a view of his life, and at such a pivotal moment. Did you know, I never even noticed that Ferretti and Fraiser weren't around for the party?

And finally - Good luck for the new job.

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Re: All your fics
[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2005-09-27 01:04 pm UTC (link)
Hi Lyore!

Thanks for posting!

Yes, Ferretti and Fraiser miss all the fun.. probably because the arc bridges the end of the season, and they couldn't bring in Teryl Rothery and Brent Stait for one walk-on scene when they filmed the end of the two-parter. But I spend wa-ay too much time trying to think up plausible reasons for such quirks..

But I've always wondered about the people that got sent to the Alpha Site.. I expect that many of them eventually wind up working at the SGC. If they had the security clearance and the skills to be on the Genesis list to begin with, probably many of them are also qualified to work at the SGC. And we know the SGC manpower requirements rise sharply.. they go from nine teams in S1 up to um, twenty-four or twenty-six in S9- support staff must have increased as well- and at the time the Alpha Site is destroyed by Anubis in S7 there are over sixty people there.. so the offworld operations also grow considerably over time.

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Re: All your fics
[info]lyore
2005-09-27 02:42 pm UTC (link)
Thinking up explanations for things which happen for practical (real-life) necessity is part of the fun of any fandom. More so in Stargate, where the PTB have a tendency to leave such details to the imagination of the viewer.

What happened to all the people who went through to the alpha site (especially the civilians) is one of the things I have always wondered about, from a security point of view. That and the growing number of politicians who know about the SGC. Given the turnover in positions, new appointments, and at least one new administration, thats a fair few people. And all the ex-NID and Trust lackeys, who lack the same incentive as the ex-servicepeople to keep quiet.

You know, when you really think about it, it amazing they've managed to keep the Stargate secret at all. Well, I guess that is why its called science fiction... :)

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Re: All your fics
[info]teilani
2005-10-28 07:00 pm UTC (link)
Redbyrd, like Lyore, I'm another lurker who has been reading your work for a little while. It was mostly happenstance I came across Dietcokechic's work this summer, and through her you. Congrats for the new job. May you prove to enjoy it!

What you've written to date has given me many pleasant hours for which I thank you. You do present the reader with splendidly well rounded and fleshed out characters. I appreciate that the people aren't parodies of themselves with your pen. Since I haven't noticed on your website any particular update feature I can subscribe to, may I friend you so that when you do get round to writing in the future, I'm more likely to catch it?

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Re: All your fics
[info]redbyrd_sgfic
2005-10-29 03:03 am UTC (link)
Hi Teilani-

Thanks for posting.. my update list is in fact an oldfashioned email list that I update manually.. so if you email me the address you'd like to receive updates at, I'll add you to the list, and you'll hear as soon as something goes up. As you might have noticed, I don't always post to LJ right away when I put fic up. But feel free to friend me if you like.. this is where I'm posting the extended story notes for people who like that sort of thing.

The new job is going well, thanks, though it's necessarily restricted my free time. I'm still writing, but it's going a lot more slowly now that I'm working both fulltime and part-time jobs. (Before I spent over a year mostly unemployed- I wrote a lot of fanfic as stress relief. Now I have money again, which is a relief, but the hours are differently stressful!)

One of the things I love about Stargate is the marvelous sense they have of being part of the real world. I'm endlessly fascinated by the contrast of the fantastic and the mundane, and that was something I played with in Eve of Destruction particularly. But part of that is trying to write the characters as if they are real people. SG-1 is by definition a little larger than life..and that affects the way other people react to them. That's something that in recent seasons we've seen on the show. Look at Mitchell's reaction to becoming part of SG-1! I'm also a great believer in the value of restricting point of view to keep a story focused. When I set out to write EoD, I was trying to imagine how the Serpent's Lair arc would have looked to someone who *wasn't* on SG-1, and I concluded it was probably pretty darned scary, the more so for being so uncertain.

I guess what I'm saying is, I think a lot about characterization, and I'm delighted to hear that it's something that readers find appealing. (Actually, I'm bouncing up and down in my chair chortling, 'they like it, they really like it!')

Thanks for sending feedback, you've made my day :).

~Redbyrd

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New Stories
(Anonymous)
2005-09-27 03:02 pm UTC (link)
Congrats on the job and I do hope you find time to keep writing some. Your stories are always enjoyable, well written and you seem to have a real feel for the characters and how others respond to them. I particularly liked the Endeavor series. This new one with Ferretti was wonderful also. Keep up the good work. Zsuzsu

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EoD
(Anonymous)
2005-11-07 08:33 pm UTC (link)
I love your work. Please let us know when new stuff is going to be up!

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